ffff, i finally made it up the stairs (i posted the journal at 6:30am and i made it up the stairs at 8am *shot*)
i slept most of the day, some of my friends even visited me after school was over ;w; i felt so loved
this is just a quick speed paint to keep me destracted from my sore throught, it took me about an hour and 30min to do :I i'll start working on community stuff now, im half way done with *xXTechnoLolitaXx's AT now, so i should have it posted either tonight or tomorrow
ffffffffffffff, god damn her OC's are hard to draw! SO MANY LITTLE DETAILS! UGH!!!! *frage*
sadly im not doing better at all, my cough and headache have gotten worse, instead of sweating im shivering like nuts and my stomach is not happy >:I
oh well
if i get one more person complaining that she should be fat im removing comments and sending this to my scraps,
just because pewdie calls he fat doesnt mean she is, keep in mind pewds makes up insults all the time
Great artwork, i do feel that her left arm is way too small in comparison to her left hand, also, her left arm is a little bit to "fat" when you compare it to the rest of her body/other arm. I also think that the left hand is bent in an unnatural way, but maybe thats just due to size. I love her facial expression!! But I feel that since she is a rock, she would not be as skinny as you made her.. I would see her as more of a pudgy character, as pewds as mentioned in amnesia before. you did a good job on the shine of the hair, however i think it was probably a bit to long, and got a little too thin towards the bottom. Also, the colouring on her shoulders, elbows, knees etc. It was a good idea of how to add colour, but I think it just makes her look slightly bruised.
This art piece is really nice! The anatomy is pretty nice, but the hands are a bit off, (trust me I never get the anatomy on hands right X3) but the rest of the anatomy is great! One thing that bothers me is that she's so skinny. (not trying to be mean or anything like that) The drawing is great, but I think Jennifer would be a bit more chubby than skinny. c: Over all the drawing is great (lol I said that a million times x3) and the background makes the picture even more cute! None of the critique's I said were to be mean by the way c:
and ummm idk i was thinking one with bunny slippers..like a pony who likes sleeping?? just not to girly since i dont want a million of the same kind of OC XDDD and girl prefrebly unless u think it should be a boy idrm ^^
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